Rayan's Speech

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Hi everyone, ah l am going to talk ah about ah l am sorry l am going to talk about my future plan that l have. ah which is studying Art course  after finishing MBA. So l thought of this when l was when l was ah at my friend's drawing Gallery, ah few months ago. When l was in Saudi Arabia to visit my family. ah so ah  l practice drawing new but just in my free time , and ah l have some apps application . ah l drew some pictures in my free time , but l feel not enough to develop my hobby. So l am planning to study this course in order to drew a perfect pictures. ah Also, l feel ah some pictures that l drew people like it but l feel there is something l miss in order to to have a perfect pictures such as using angel ah shadow (from 1:3 to 1:7) l did not say anything. Also, ah obviously this plan is depend on how l can save money in order to pay for this course and to pay for art tools because as you know art course require a lot of money ah and a specific kind of tools such as ah specific kind of colors and ah some papers.and l feel l will l will do this l will get this goal.
 Analysis:

pronunciation: 5\5
vocabulary: 5\5
Crammer: 4\5
thing that surprised me that l spoke very clearly, and nicely. However, l did number of errors because l was little nervous.For example, l said (a perfect pictures) which is wrong , because l cannot use article such as( a) with plural. Also, in future l will do better than this speech because , l will do my best to avoid those errors l made.In addition, l have to make a lot of practice such as listen. without a doubt that will increase vocabulary. Moreover, l should pay attention for grammar mistakes. Finally, if l do all these , my English will develop.